tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post143387466330590955..comments2023-08-27T04:51:29.367-07:00Comments on If: La palabra diminuta: The "grand finale"Sandra.ifhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07861930312460679629noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post-37998239714268468022008-06-18T21:31:00.000-07:002008-06-18T21:31:00.000-07:00yes yes yes. Lovely writing too!yes yes yes. Lovely writing too!Tammie Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09018402134070834516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post-46079029348227642162008-06-01T08:36:00.000-07:002008-06-01T08:36:00.000-07:00I once saw an eclipse of the moon, in the way your...I once saw an eclipse of the moon, in the way your friend describes. I will never forget, though at times I wish I could.Thunkfulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05548860408801479970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post-10534602813384696582008-05-28T14:07:00.000-07:002008-05-28T14:07:00.000-07:00That middle stanza is wonderful, filled with the d...That middle stanza is wonderful, filled with the delight one has when actually viewing fireworks.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post-7712350544441031762008-05-28T11:33:00.000-07:002008-05-28T11:33:00.000-07:00Oh, the excitement of a fireworks finale and gazin...Oh, the excitement of a fireworks finale and gazing into your lover'e eyes! Lovely.Barbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16660942367303941481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post-24876222516818328992008-05-27T19:12:00.000-07:002008-05-27T19:12:00.000-07:00..the last stanza has the soft twang of a lullaby......the last stanza has the soft twang of a lullaby..thanksAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post-3376319460977433012008-05-27T18:56:00.000-07:002008-05-27T18:56:00.000-07:00"a part of beauty you have rarely seen and should ..."a part of beauty you have rarely seen and should never forget." Lovely.Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post-30662594553469435952008-05-27T18:17:00.000-07:002008-05-27T18:17:00.000-07:00fireworks... you have caught the light reflected b...fireworks... you have caught the light reflected beautifully...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post-89865210662180477532008-05-27T07:20:00.000-07:002008-05-27T07:20:00.000-07:00yes...bluebethley...your wondering is correct ...t...yes...bluebethley...your wondering is correct ...this event was told to me but a dear friend of mine and they are mostly his words...<BR/>thanks..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post-11732581678724858032008-05-27T05:47:00.000-07:002008-05-27T05:47:00.000-07:00Your poem resonates with lovely language and close...Your poem resonates with lovely language and close observation. That last stanza confuses me a bit, for the intimate "you" of the first and second stanza is not the same as the "you" in the last stanza. Yet the wonder of the experience comes through beautifully.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post-66497341033622388132008-05-27T03:00:00.000-07:002008-05-27T03:00:00.000-07:00There is a wistfulness about finales despite their...There is a wistfulness about finales despite their bright lights and excitement. Closure and distance follow, and this can be lonely. I think you have captured this.<BR/><A HREF="http://slcpoems.blogspot.com" REL="nofollow">Writing in Faith: Poems</A>SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8217856886345006219.post-5426966286630099812008-05-26T21:12:00.000-07:002008-05-26T21:12:00.000-07:00Beautiful,Beautiful,Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com