when the moon was bright
in the winter that night
I eagerly wanted to know
what you did not show
I was thinking of you
deciding what to do
In the kitchen I found you
with unexpected kiss
I satiated your hunger
your lips trembling
our hearts shaking
smelling your scent
kisses would not end
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you capture so nicely the intensity of that first kiss.
A memorable moment well told.
I like how it's structured with rhyme at the beginning like how I picture life before kissing. And then at the end there isn't much rhyme left to symbolize how unruly our oves become when we fall in love.
a very nicely told moment.. the passionate first kiss..
how do i address you? IF seems a touch impersonal to address...
Hola Leo......soy Sandra....:)
Full of emotion.. You presented the moment wonderfully.
Kissing in the kitchen - I love it!
nice..hot poem that gets the blood aroused. wish I could remember that long ago.
Ooh, I just love this and can definitely feel the tension and passion vibrating from this kiss.
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