jueves, 20 de marzo de 2008

Tiptoeing


I arrive to the border of your feelings
I look at your heart from the edge
Tiptoeing I come closer
I am suddenly afraid
I do not dare to take a step
I talk to myself:
Beware, don´t fall, wait

7 comentarios:

solsamba dijo...

Your writing is beautiful.

Rob Kistner dijo...

Beautiful! ;)

gautami tripathy dijo...

brief but loaded!

watered down

Thunkful dijo...

Amazing. Touching. Bravo!

arboleda dijo...

gracias...!!
(Señorita cinco...:))

Linda Jacobs dijo...

That first line is awesome! I can see that heart beating!

Billy dijo...

Beautiful, skillful poem, Lluivia. Excellent!