domingo, 20 de junio de 2010

Dawn has roots


they dig with pain in darkness
letting them  flourish
up to the sky in lightness



12 comentarios:

Tammie dijo...

yes, that is their journey, wonderful poem.

Understanding Alice dijo...

they spend themselves in darkness
and give birth to leaf and flower

:)

Carlos Gesmundo dijo...

Glory after pain. Light after darkness. You know one because of the other.

Thanks, Sandra!

anthonynorth dijo...

Ah, where would we be without roots. Nice one.

SandyCarlson dijo...

How hard they work, yet how simple they make it look!

Leo dijo...

simple and amazing! :)

lissa dijo...

very hopeful

Tumblewords: dijo...

Beautiful! So much thought in so few words. Love it.

Ramesh Sood dijo...

Very beautifully thought out and penned.. loved it..

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Marinela Reka dijo...

Lovely poem, like it.
Short Poems

Patti dijo...

what a great take on the prompt- loved it!

pieceofpie dijo...

hmm the pain of growing... a sorrowful tune that turns and sways... beautiful refraction