domingo, 25 de julio de 2010

Wings

broken wings in chains,
released  imagination,
fly taking their vein


12 comentarios:

anthonynorth dijo...

This one is excellently deep.

Leo dijo...

very deep poem Sandra, the angels with broken wings...

Loch Rob dijo...

I agree with Anthony. Deep and introspective piece. Releasing our imagination, does give us wings to achieve what otherwise seems impossible.

Harshad mehta dijo...

Brilliantly done and deep.

SandyCarlson dijo...

Freeing ourselves from the chains of brokenness is tough work. Beautiful poem.

Jim dijo...

It can't get much worse, with broken wings and in chains!
I am glad you found their escape, it took both their and your imaginations.
..

Amity dijo...

i like the metaphor of your lines Sandra...

it's brilliant!

Tumblewords: dijo...

Well crafted - the imagery is wonderful!

Ramesh Sood dijo...

released imagination.. This is so very beautiful..

JP/deb dijo...

wonderful use of language, Sandra.

peace,
JP/deb

sandy, from gardenpath dijo...

a perfect haiku

Jingle dijo...

beautiful Haiku!