it tiptoes when hiding,
it marches to the war
delightful under the trees
painful over the stones
it hesitates in a cross road
like a feather when in love
heavy when it is hot
full of pomp when getting married
may stumble when getting old
slow after closing a door
quick under the storm
sometimes leaves lasting footsprints
sometimes it talks in silent roads
it only stops when facing
the sea in its eternal roar
7 comentarios:
Oh the feet, forever walking! So perfect a post ! Loved your poetry!
UL
You covered all walks of life in that dainty poem.
gautami
that was lovely,,, i loved all the variations.....
This was really engaging... ;)
great take on the prompt! Lovely full of emotion feet!
I really enjoyed this.
Very cool way of describing all the walks of life. That ocean image at the end is my favorite.
Perfect, just perfect! A gentle walk through life...
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