domingo, 18 de enero de 2009

Fading memories

I can stop painful feelings

putting in chains thoughts

to stop that sad streaming

10 comentarios:

Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) dijo...

couldn't have said it better ... locking sad thoughts away, i do it all the time. right now i need to chain some thoughts!

Anónimo dijo...

Link by link the thoughts and memories grow. Very nicely said.

Anónimo dijo...

I understand the process, but it seems eventually the chains begin to feel too heavy... perhaps that's the price.

Anónimo dijo...

..that desire to say no to pain..so emotional..so lovely..
many thanks..

anthonynorth dijo...

It takes discipline to do that. Well said.

SandyCarlson dijo...

I know those chains, too, my friend. Very well done. Thanks for sharing with OSI.

Tumblewords: dijo...

Wise! Nicely done!

floreta dijo...

if only it were that easy..

Sandra.if dijo...

those chains are discipline and will as Anthony said ...yes...:)

Ella dijo...

Interesting expression in this simple poem. Very lovely and intriguing. I think sadness draws people to many places, "link by link". Thoughtful poem.

Ella