sábado, 10 de abril de 2010

Vicariously



in the name of love we stayed
after love had gone
in the name of love we lay
















nombrándolo amamos
y aunque no estaba
nombrándolo quedamos

15 comentarios:

Amity dijo...

Nice haiku...:)

If and only if...!

anthonynorth dijo...

That's beautiful.

Leo dijo...

ola Sandra.. long time no see.
i like this vicariousness.. love and love only i guess! :)

BAR DO BARDO dijo...

Bastante adequado em sua falta de limites.

fourwindshaiga dijo...

Beautiful, and sad.

gautami tripathy dijo...

I like...

ode to insomnia

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Lorena dijo...

beautiful, reminds me of marriage which ebbs and flows

Marinela Reka dijo...

I liked very much...great haiku :)

Marinela x x

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Mojo dijo...

This is too often too true. The hollow shell of a love that once was, kept for appearances' sake.

Sad.

Carlos Gesmundo dijo...

Beautiful verse. Sad thoughts. Love is complicated.

Best wishes, Sandra.

Tumblewords: dijo...

Strong, strong, strong. Beautiful and provocative. Perfect 'vicarious'.

Sandra (if) dijo...

thanks for your words...!

lissa dijo...

sad but true....

lissa dijo...

ps, I like your new blog layout, if you need help, let me know

Jim dijo...

This is sooooo good, Sandra, I like it! And the lines are sooooo true sooooo often!
This rings of my first marriage an awfully lot.
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