sábado, 23 de octubre de 2010

The grace of the moon

I had never seen the  moon
as I hid  in my room
frost in my thoughts
in the night I was lost
under special circumstances
through the trees
between the leaves
someone looking for a pet
shot the moon with no regret
enjoying its trace
I learnt about its grace
I spy it now each day
when it grows or when it fades

20 comentarios:

Glowby dijo...

Magical!

Tammie Lee dijo...

this sounds like a wonderful relationship to have with the moon.

Reflections dijo...

Such wonderful imagery stored within your words.

anthonynorth dijo...

Beautiful.

Ramesh Sood dijo...

Oh, Moon is a magical attraction..for me it is very soothing to watch him.. to talk about him.. to talk with him..loved your take..

Harshad mehta dijo...

Just beautiful.

It has brought me out of the room, to steal a look!

Harshad mehta dijo...

Just beautiful.

It has brought me out of the room, to steal a look!

Sweetest in the Gale dijo...

The moon is always there, even if we can't see it. Grace, indeed. Lovely words!

sandy dijo...

This is very nice. I love the line frost in my thoughts. In fact,I have had it.

ρομπερτ dijo...

how hope providing a piece. impressed !

please have a good new week.

daily athens

Rene/ Not The Rockefellers dijo...

I am glad you came around and now enjoy it's beauty :)

SandyCarlson dijo...

I seek it, too.

Well done.

gautami tripathy dijo...

Mystical moon...

an ode

And do get aboard the Poetry Train every Monday
mornings and thereafter!

Amity dijo...

I enjoy its grace too when it grows and disappears...something like a magic!

jingleyanqiu dijo...

peaceful and blissful grace here,
love your poetry.

Patti dijo...

gorgeous- as was the moon this past week!

Jingle dijo...

love it.
stunning imagery.

Jeeves dijo...

Grows and it fades!!!Such a wonderful picture

Sandra.if dijo...

thanks...!!

Amity dijo...

I am always amazed with the moon...it seems to talk to me while i am alone moonlighting!