a seed and a womb
a need and a want
the arms in a hug
a stab in the back
a hope and a lie
a touch and a time
a thought and a line
a look and a smile
a stone on the road
a wish and a dream
you reading this
it is a wonderful list of graceful movements involved in life's simple pleasures.... well, not so much the infliction of pain but in most beautiful.... caesura
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I like that. So many reasons for a pause. And the final pause was the best.
Great poem!
Teresa
And I paused before writing this comment.. cause of the pause deserves applause..
Very thoughtful...
nothingness
Pause well felt...
So many sensitive reasons for a pause, nicely written.
it is a wonderful list of graceful movements involved in life's simple pleasures.... well, not so much the infliction of pain but in most beautiful.... caesura
thank you for returning to the real and important things in and of life.
a good new week for you.
daily athens
I like this so very much. Thank you for giving me pause to think.
Yes Sandra, I did pause from my work to read this post of yours... :-)
gracias....thanks!!
I hope they get the message! Excellent take on the prompt, dagger sharp.
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Oh, this is so lovely - wonderfully provocative combinations...
I appreciate the comment you posted on my blog. Thank you!
very nice, It feels like square dancing in my mind- take a line dance in a circle with it, trade it for another line, give it a whirl-
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