domingo, 7 de noviembre de 2010

A pause

what is the cause of a pause?

a seed and a womb
a need and a want
the arms in a hug
a stab in the back
a hope and a lie
a touch and a time
a thought and a line
a look and a smile
a stone on the road
a wish and a dream
you reading this

14 comentarios:

anthonynorth dijo...

I like that. So many reasons for a pause. And the final pause was the best.

razzamadazzle dijo...

Great poem!

Teresa

Ramesh Sood dijo...

And I paused before writing this comment.. cause of the pause deserves applause..

gautami tripathy dijo...

Very thoughtful...

nothingness

Harshad mehta dijo...

Pause well felt...

Reflections dijo...

So many sensitive reasons for a pause, nicely written.

pieceofpie dijo...

it is a wonderful list of graceful movements involved in life's simple pleasures.... well, not so much the infliction of pain but in most beautiful.... caesura

ρομπερτ dijo...

thank you for returning to the real and important things in and of life.

a good new week for you.


daily athens

SandyCarlson dijo...

I like this so very much. Thank you for giving me pause to think.

Amity dijo...

Yes Sandra, I did pause from my work to read this post of yours... :-)

Sandra.if dijo...

gracias....thanks!!

Geraldine dijo...

I hope they get the message! Excellent take on the prompt, dagger sharp.

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Tumblewords: dijo...

Oh, this is so lovely - wonderfully provocative combinations...

I appreciate the comment you posted on my blog. Thank you!

Lorena dijo...

very nice, It feels like square dancing in my mind- take a line dance in a circle with it, trade it for another line, give it a whirl-