martes, 30 de septiembre de 2008

moment

Reflejos efímeros en el agua
me hipnotizan,
reteniendo el momento
la imagen se eterniza


Fleetings reflections on the water
hipnotize my vision,
I grasp the image
eternizing the moment

13 comentarios:

teric dijo...

comparing fleeting to reflections is just perfect!

Quiet Paths dijo...

This is so lovely. I wish I could read it in Spanish.

fourwindshaiga dijo...

The would stay with me too. I like your poem very much.

Lenore dijo...

Nicely done

Deborah Godin dijo...

I love the flow of this, and I agree, to read it in the original would be a great! Love the photo as well, I really took some time fuguring it out!

Pam dijo...

What an intriguing photo. It does indeed grab attention and hypnotizes.

if dijo...

the pic was taken from a dock focusing the dike in front of the sea bay ...the color of the rusty metal was amazing...(Puerto Montt)

mgirl dijo...

Your words are hypnotizing. Beautifully written.

anthonynorth dijo...

Beautiful words, and a very enigmatic picture.

SandyCarlson dijo...

Oh, those fleeting reflections! Internalizing them and making them last can be so very difficult. Thanks for this thought.

tumblewords dijo...

Reflections are lovely and fleeting, as well! Nicely done!

Kathiesbirds dijo...

Water reflections are the perfect image of something fleeting. Well done.

qualcosa di bello dijo...

yes, it is mesmerizing to stare at reflections...a beautiful drawing into the moment