driving in the mist
on the window I can see
intrincated messages
that the rain leaves,
far beyond a bird goes by
between the pines and the clouds
the grey sky, the soaked grass
show winter time,
"queltehues" soaring in couple
the fog rising slowly over the oaks,
on the road
a man in poncho stays
the white stork standing still
both waiting in the cold of the day
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LOVED THE LINES...
I can see
intrincated messages
that the rain leaves,
Beautiful imagery.. a lovely poem..
A timeless moment. Lovely.
You paint a great picture with those words.
I see this scene as vividly as if I had been there - lovely imagery!
this brings to mind a pause or a break in deciding which way to go
I can't remember if I commented on this before since blogger is sort having errors with comments, but it didn't matter, I think reading it a second times makes me like it more
Sounds like a wonderful experience.
I love this story told in verse- a very good interpretation for this prompt.
yes Lissa ..I have also noticed some errors in the showing and reading comments but I do not know if it is blogger fault or my configuration...thanks for all your nice comments...
A gorgeous moment of complete awareness. Beautiful poem.
You capture the moment with such soft, eloquent imagery. I really like your poem.
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