sounds from nowhere
stayed just into your head
it sounded like murmurs and orders
could not understand that disorder
but you had no other choice
it is impossible to know
they just function and they show
becoming invisible enemy
and will make them believe in evil
poor guy that is enough
to make others run fast
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What an interesting piece. How is it that our awareness, our souls are neurons in action? Chemistry and spirit--one reality.
Well, I am thinking of sounds from nowhere. Of course there is the ear ringing that I have constantly. It came from the firework cannon of a rock group that went off about six feet from me.
I won't run fast from you as I can accept your inner sounds that only you can hear. I have a few private ones myself. Some sneaked in, others wedged their way in while I was cognizant of there actions. :-)
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...I know there are several reasons someone may "hear voices" ...:)when I created this I was thinking about hallucinations or psychosis...Thank you Sandy !...Jim I like to read your explanations...!
I like this. Very deep and interesting. It's a read that make you think.
Nicely done~ It is so true that our inner voice can be our invisible enemy~
I thank you for looking in at my Ruby Red post and for leaving your nice comment, both here and there.
BTW, did you scroll on down to read my OSI? It was the next post on down.
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This is wonderfully lucid. It is uncomfortable but not frightening. I will not run. I want to stay.
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So true - I don't always 'trust' my inner voice...:) Nice work!
how neurons produce a voice --
without a doubt some probing words there --
it is a mystery -
example -
what does the inner voice answer if asked a 1000 times -
should i do such and such bad thing ?
.. theologists,sociologists,psychologists,anthroplogists. they are all at work ..and have their own views
many thanks fo writing this ..
typo : cmnt above /anthropologists /for writing this _ (apologies)
this has made my stupid head think!
and that makes it a brilliant piece :)
my inner voice has given me very direct information before that turned out quite accurate. Neurons or spirit... maybe we have both.
yes Tammie Lee...I think we have both.
A lovely read.. great use of the prompt.. illustrating the chaotic and confusing aspect of "inner voice"...
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