la palabra que crece con los otros...
Very nicely done. I really liked the last line, too.
After all the chaos, I love the line 'beauty with no sound'.
silent beauty -- the best kind.
chaos around contributed to its growth:-the sound of raindrops;-the sound of people tending to it;-the sound of farm machines;yes, many sounds!
Sandra, that little seed does its function oblivious of the noise and chaos...Been missing you, it's been a couple of weeks since your last visit. :-)..
"Beauty with no sound" - a delightful concept, that we unfortunately come across so rarely now!
thanks for your words.......I am a little "far" from the pc on these days...
Soundless beauty is usually my favorite kind...wonderful post!
interesting tumultuous little journey this one takes me on, like a brief roller coaster ride, I'm still a little dizzy, in a thought provoking way
Beauty with no sound. This is an enchanting piece!
This is a fine poem, rich 'with love' and hope. However, I think it would be even more lovely as a five line tanka. Thank you...pajamas
the silence of life is deafening in a big noise... i like that...
"Beauty with no sound". Sometimes a picture or a scene speaks louder than words. Such is the self-expression of nature.
a small seed planted with love...will overcome the chaos- beautifully stated!
Tended, it grows, asking so little.
beauty with no sound - love this line, & I like how you spin chaos into something positive
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