domingo, 4 de octubre de 2009

A tale of two languages




“no eches leña al fuego”

just let it wait

when furious lust descends

true love ascends

I see the passion flame

all over the stage

“lo que sube tiene que caer”

enjoying your words

you inspired me this verse



(inspired by Heliotropism´s poems)

15 comentarios:

Sue dijo...

indeed, what goes up must come down. lovely verse.

anthonynorth dijo...

So much depth in this. Excellent.

Maggie dijo...

I agree that as lust descends...true love always ascends.

Linda Jacobs dijo...

"when furious lust descends true love ascends"

Great line!

qualcosa di bello dijo...

yes, the truth is what remains. very beautiful!

SandyCarlson dijo...

What can emerge from passion....The possibilities can be lovely.

Tumblewords: dijo...

Very nice!

Leo dijo...

excellent verse! very deep!

zoya gautam dijo...

in my opinion ur title is good enough to make a movie on ..

..' The possibilities can be lovely '

Heliotropism dijo...

I can feel the passion burning from this! Love the picture as well... fuels the fire.

if dijo...

thanks......gracias......:)
Sandra (if)

Pearl dijo...

neat combo of languages and picture. the use of ascend and descends evokes the astrology of fate of venus in ascension, etc

Patti dijo...

Excellent descent!!! Wonderful!

lissa dijo...

quite lovely fuse of the two languages

Jim dijo...

What goes down will come up, especially lust down and love up.
I might need to know Heliotroposm for some nice poetry but I don't know him.
Your picture fits very nicely, fire is conducive to lust and love.
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