viernes, 2 de octubre de 2009

First kiss

when the moon was bright

in the winter that night

I eagerly wanted to know
what you did not show

I was thinking of you

deciding what to do

In the kitchen I found you

with unexpected kiss

I satiated your hunger

your lips trembling
our hearts shaking
smelling your scent

kisses would not end

9 comentarios:

Sue dijo...

you capture so nicely the intensity of that first kiss.

anthonynorth dijo...

A memorable moment well told.

Linda Jacobs dijo...

I like how it's structured with rhyme at the beginning like how I picture life before kissing. And then at the end there isn't much rhyme left to symbolize how unruly our oves become when we fall in love.

Anónimo dijo...

a very nicely told moment.. the passionate first kiss..

how do i address you? IF seems a touch impersonal to address...

if dijo...

Hola Sandra....:)

Anónimo dijo...

Full of emotion.. You presented the moment wonderfully.

Dee Martin dijo...

Kissing in the kitchen - I love it!

gs batty dijo... poem that gets the blood aroused. wish I could remember that long ago.

Heliotropism dijo...

Ooh, I just love this and can definitely feel the tension and passion vibrating from this kiss.