domingo, 25 de octubre de 2009

Esquiva - Elusive for OSI

equals they strive
try to balance it
make it the same
put it in order
but it is elusive
walks out lenient
ignoring control
it escapes the inspection
creating the exception

“Exceptio probat regulam in casibus non exceptis”

los iguales se esfuerzan
tratan de nivelarla
volverla parecida
la ubican en la fila
pero ella es esquiva
permanece  indulgente
ignorando el control
se aleja de la inspección
creando la excepción

19 comentarios:

Amias dijo...

This is amazing, this is so with many aspects of persons, places, and things. This has the making of a classic! Life and nature can relate.

Jim dijo...

Hey Sandra. I am trying to solve your riddle. My guess is the telling of the upbring of a child and of its subsequent behavior.
This exception happens with children quite frequently. I am an advocate of the rule, "(if you) spare the rod (you will) spoil the child."
BTW, I don't see you signed up with Mr. Linky?

if dijo...

thanks Jim for telling me....I was being elusive...:)
I had used a pic of a house in this post to show how different it was an old house in a stylish neighborhood...but I delete it because many persons or things (as Amias says) can relate with this word...

Maggie dijo...

You had a very good control on this elusive piece.

Amity Me dijo...

i like it!

Sandra, you're a Spanish? Whatever, I promise to be a regular in your site...:)

don't spare the rod so that children will grow up with good breeding.

have a great week ahead Sandra.

te amo!

anthonynorth dijo...

Mysterious words today, just as 'elusive' demands.

SandyCarlson dijo...

I will dwell on this wonderful piece and take it to work with me tomorrow.

Tumblewords: dijo...

Balance is so elusive in most areas. Nice work!

Jeeves dijo...

Essence of the poem is very nice.

Tammie Lee dijo...

often what we 'strive' for
is elusive
to what actually is
nice piece

Neha Sahi Saigal dijo...

This has so many meanings... The form develops, I think, based on how one is pre-disposed.

Its beautiful, thank you for it. Have a happy week ahead :-)

if dijo...


Jukota dijo...

As soon as you said balance, I knew it related to something elusive, as that is the one things that seems to elude most people in one way or another. Nice job!

Anónimo dijo...

great work!!
i really liked it!

lissa dijo...

I read it as a couple trying to mend each other's pain with unexpected results but then again the meaning could be an elusive endeavor with endless meanings to this person and that person

Patti dijo...

"it escapes the inspection

creating the exception" perfect choice for last lines- well written!

Sue dijo...

ah, balance. that is indeed elusive!

Heliotropism dijo...

This is beautiful. The depiction of difficulties created out of a simplicity such as being an equal.

Anónimo dijo...

elusive balance is it? :)